A Horse Story with a Twist

Stone Soup Editors' Notes  /   /  By Gerry Mandel, Editor
Stone Soup Magazine
November/December 2016

We hope all our subscribers have had a chance to read the new January/February 2013 issue of Stone Soup. There are so many great stories in this issue, it was hard to choose one to feature on our website. We finally settled on “Friends Forever,” by 11-year-old Naomi Vliet, about a girl named Rachel who has always wanted a horse of her own. Then one day Rachel’s brother helps rescue a wild mare and her foal from some mustangers. Will Rachel’s wish finally come true? In alternating chapters, Naomi tells her story from two points of view: Rachel’s and the mare’s. The mare is separated from her herd, she is alone and she needs help. She knows Rachel is kind, but she won’t feel right until she’s back with her herd. Rachel falls in love with the mare and her foal, but deep inside she knows what she needs to do. In five short pages, the author paints a multi-layered portrait of a young girl and a wild animal, each with her own needs and desires. And illustrator Jessica Birchfield brings Naomi’s vision to life with her beautiful drawings. Well done, Naomi and Jessica!

Gerry Mandel, Editor
About the Author

Back in 1973, I was part of the group of UC Santa Cruz students who put together the very first issue of Stone Soup. It has been my great pleasure to continue to edit and publish Stone Soup for all these years, along with co-founder William Rubel. We hope you enjoy reading Stone Soup as much as we enjoy making it.

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4 Comments
 
  1. Nyomi Zinga Age:10 March 2, 2013 at 11:43 am Reply

    I love horses, so this was one of my favorite stories! I especially loved the illustrations by Jessica Birchfeild.

  2. emily June 17, 2013 at 1:01 pm Reply

    i think this is a great idea for a story! keep up the good work! 🙂

  3. GB Shakespeare December 25, 2013 at 2:22 pm Reply

    I thought this story was AMAZING. The way we got to see it from two points of view melted my heart. You got to see how much Rachel wanted the horse, and how much the horse needed to run free.Nice job, Naomi Vliet

  4. Amanda Zoonfeld June 25, 2015 at 5:40 am Reply

    It’s K. Could of been better. Make a dog become Rachels new best friend and the horse gets jealous. THAT woulda been gold. But ya, its K.

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