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Daily Creativity #91 | Flash Contest: Use a Classic Opening Line as a Starting Point

Choose one of these opening lines from classic novels, and use it as the starting point for your own short story. “There was no possibility of taking a walk that day.” Jane Eyre by Charlotte Bronte (1847) “Last night I dreamt I went to Manderley again.” Rebecca by Daphne Du Maurier (1938) “I write this sitting in the kitchen sink.” I Capture the Castle by Dodie Smith (1949)

Saturday Newsletter: June 25, 2020

“Peering Out” by Delaney Slote, 12 Published in the July/August 2018 issue A note from William Call for Bloggers Are there ongoing protests in your city related to the Black Lives Matter (BLM) movement? How about public art? We’re asking for blog submissions related to BLM in your town. You can submit art, writing, music, or whatever you’re inspired to create. We’re also looking for readers who live in Portland, OR to write about what is going on there. If you have anything you’d like to say about the situation, please submit it to our blog category. To our readers in Portland—please stay safe. Book Contest Warning! Warning! Deadline of August 10 approaching for Stone Soup’s Second Annual Book Contest! I know that a good number of you are on top of the deadline, and some of you have even submitted your manuscripts already. Congratulations! As a writer who is often running late, I can tell you that the ability to write to the deadline is a life skill that is (almost) as essential to the craft of writing as writing itself. Art and Poetry Peering Out, the featured artwork in today’s newsletter, is by Delaney Slote. What a difference time makes! In the Summer of 2018, when we first published this photograph, it made us at Stone Soup smile. Two girls looking out the window into the sunny outdoors planning an excursion. It is a photograph that suggests possibilities. At least it did in 2018. If this had been sent to us today, we would have read it as the opposite: As two girls looking out at a world shut down, one in which they are not quite prisoners but also very much not free. A world in which looking out the window reminds them of the danger we are all in, and what we have lost. This is a great lesson in how the meaning we find in art shifts with our experiences. I want you to keep this photograph in mind as you grow older. There is no question that at some point in school you will be assigned to read a book that you find totally boring but that has an outsized reputation as a brilliant work of art. This happened to me once with a novel by Charles Dickens I was assigned in high school: David Copperfield. What an utterly stupid book, I thought! And then, forty years later, I re-read it for a book that I was writing. I was amazed! What a deep and profound book that novel that I thought stupid really was. As a reader I had needed more experience, like having been divorced, to find the heart of the story. There needed to be a different William, not a sixteen-year-old William but a William that had more to bring to the book. Delany’s photograph is magnificently composed. Look at the arcs made by the girls’ arms. Pay attention to the shapes defined by the way their arms and bodies divide up the space. The part of the photograph I like the most is how the girls are together but separate, but also linked by how they are holding onto the curtain. They will both be feeling the pull of the other. Friends, sisters, cousins, sharing a moment together. Last year, there were two second place winners in our book contest, both poets: Analise Braddock and Tatiana Rebecca Shrayer. For those of you who subscribe to Stone Soup, you will have received both of their books in your Summer Special Poetry Issue. This week, we are featuring a poem by Analise in the newsletter. In a future newsletter, we will feature a poem by Tatiana. Their books are both available in the July/August edition of Stone Soup, which you can buy via our online store, and they are each available as individual ebooks, which you can also purchase for $4.99 at our store (and/or at Amazon). Please scroll down to the bottom of the Newsletter to read Analise’s “The Heart of the Earth” from her book The Golden Elephant. This poem is so powerful. So perfect. I just want you to read it. Please read it aloud. Thank you, Analise. I want to close today by sending you all to the Stone Soup website, Stonesoup.com. Follow the links to the fabulous work that has been posted this week. If you are not a subscriber, please, please subscribe—and tell your friends and colleagues to do so as well. Subscription dollars are what makes our work possible. The work our print magazine features is magnificent—worth re-reading—and the magazine itself is a pleasure to hold in your hand. Until next week, Winners from Weekly Flash Contest #16 Weekly Flash Contest #16: Write an unsettling poem. The week commencing July 13 (Daily Creativity prompt #81) was our sixteenth week of flash contests, with a sinister challenge set by contributor and writing workshop member Liam Hancock, 13. It seems everyone had plenty of scary stuff to get out of their systems: We had an absolute record number of entries this week. More than 70, in fact! Well done, Liam, for setting such a terrifically inspiring challenge, and thank you for all your work helping us read and judge our huge pile. It was really fun working with you. We were looking for the creepiest, most unsettling poems for our winners’ list, and we certainly found them! While all our winners had slightly different subjects, all of them built tension through their poems to a frankly terrifying end. And they showed us that while sinister, creepy, eerie things often come at night, these feelings can be evoked in broad daylight too. The honorable mentions were equally varied, moving between suspense, nightmares, death, unexplained disappearances, and even managing to make a butterfly into something sinister. Congratulations to our winners and honorable mentions, listed below. You can read the winning entries for this week (and previous weeks) at the Stone Soup website. Winners “In the Light of the Red Moon” by Katherine Bergsieker, 12, Denver, CO “Something Peculiar” by Fern Hadley, 11, Cary,

Flash contest #16: Write an unsettling poem. Our Winners and their Work!

Flash contest #16: Write an unsettling poem Create a poem with an eerie or creepy tone. You can make the poem as nonsensical or as relatable as possible, but retain the sense of being unsettled throughout. Liam Hancock, 12Danville, CA The week commencing July 13th (Daily Creativity prompt #81) was our sixteenth week of flash contests, with a sinister challenge set by contributor and writing workshop member Liam Hancock, 13. It seems everyone had plenty of scary stuff to get out of their systems–we had an absolute record number of entries this week: more than 70! Well done Liam for setting such a terrifically inspiring challenge, and thank you for all your work helping us read and judge our huge pile. It was really fun working with you. We were looking for the creepiest, most unsettling poems for our winners’ list, and we certainly found them! While all our winners had slightly different subjects, all of them built tension through their poems to a frankly terrifying end; and they showed us that while sinister, creepy, eerie things often come at night, these feelings can be evoked in broad daylight, too. The honorable mentions were equally varied, moving between suspense, nightmares, death, unexplained disappearances–and even managing to make a butterfly into something sinister.  Well done, everyone. Also, there were a few entries that didn’t place in the contest, but which we will share with everyone on our COVID-19 blog in the coming weeks–well done to Samson Brown, 13; Madi Frank, 11; Eleanor Levy, 8; Lucas Lin, 11; Aviva Rosenstock, 9; Olivia Wang, 10. Thank you to all of you who entered and successfully unsettled the judges, and special congratulations to all of our worthy winners! Winners “In the Light of the Red Moon” by Katherine Bergsieker, 12, Denver, CO “Something Peculiar” by Fern Hadley, 11, Cary, NC “Shattered” by Meleah Goldman, 10, Oakland, CA “Count Them Down” by Ella Yamamura, 12, Cary, NC “A Little Off” by Keira Zhang, 12, Belmont, MA Highly Commended “Lucid Dreams” by Aiden Avedissian, 9, Valley Glen, CA “Tick Tock” by Morgan Dodd, 13, Portland, OR “When Mark Went Missing…” by Daniel Shorten, 9, Mallow, Ireland “Lifeless Vessels” by Ismini Vasiloglou, 11, Atlanta, GA “The Butterfly” by Michela You, 11, Lexington, MA  You can brace yourselves and read the winning entries for this week below, and catch up with previous weeks’ contests and winners at the Flash Contest Winners Roll page. Katherine Bergsieker, 12Denver, CO In the Light of the Red Moon Katherine Bergsieker, 12 When the light of the red moon Illuminates the night You can see what normally stays tucked away, Hidden. The tree, unveiling Its gnarled branches To grab unsuspecting people. The bird without a head That only dares to come out When protected by the red moon’s light. The flowers, digging Themselves up, Through their dehydrated roots. The grass, silently Whispering gibberish That must mean something To someone. And a girl, all alone In the eerily silent Lake, Unaware of the odd actions From those around her. Looking ghastly As the starlight and red moon Highlight her almost lifeless eyes, She treads water Effortlessly. A part of her face Chips off into the water. Then another. “It is time,” She whispers In her own language, Blowing a kiss to the lake. She lifts her head Up to the stars, Softly murmuring. The stars shift As though in a Ghostly, parallel Universe. Then they grab the girl, Pulling her towards them. Her hair floats underneath her, Her eyes peacefully closed, Looking as though She is lying on a board, Arms outstretched. But she isn’t. She’s floating. Tiny bits and pieces Of her Permanently embedded into the lake, As dark as the night sky that it rests underneath, Singing chilling songs To the girl Flying In the dark, Forgotten Atmosphere, Illuminated by the ghostly light Of the red moon. Fern Hadley, 11 Cary, NC Something Peculiar Fern Hadley, 11   Meleah Goldman, 10Oakland, CA Shattered Meleah Goldman, 10 The perfect duplicate of myself, looking back at me with piercing blue eyes, through the fragile glass of a mirror. I confide in her my every move. Her rippleless dark hair sun kissed skin her muted face identical to mine. Reflections, mysterious and eerie things. You in another parallel land, Does she know what world my thoughts have created; what I am saying? I try to touch the girl in the mirror as she tries to touch me yet only feel the cold, stinging, hardened surface of the glass. I look back at my own stabbing blue eyes. I hear a crack The mirror shatters. The fragmented remains of the mirror Shows my own reflection, Now cracked and frail. In the jagged edges of the mirror, I see a silhouette that is not mine. Eyes like bottomless black holes; forever churning in hunger. Its alarmingly faded face . . . Thump . . . Thump . . . THUMP Ella Yamamura, 12Cary, NC Count Them Down Ella Yamamura, 12       Keira Zhang, 12Belmont, MA A Little Off Keira Zhang, 12 The sun bounced off of her ivory skin This was a day to forget about him Best friends till death he lied In the end, there was no surprise Everyone she loved, left her; the word she came to know was: betray But she would try to forget about it today There was a new fair not too far Maybe the happiness would drag her out the dark Not a single cloud in sight The sun gleamed oh, so bright Kids littered the place Licking ice cream with a smiling face But even with the pastel candy floss Even with the famous ring toss Even with screams of adrenaline Even with the popcorn tins There was something off about this place Something a little off about this case Everyone was too happy Something about this world felt nasty As she looked around once more She saw something that made her sick to the core Their