“That’s practice for today, so dry off and go home” Illustrator Alicia Betancourt, 13 for Guts and a Few Strokes by Eve Asher, 10 Published March/April 2002. A note from William Rubel I am going to keep my comments short his week as I don’t want to detract from Editor Emma Wood’s call for reviews of classic books, below. What I’d like to say today is that being a reader and being a writer go hand-in-hand. While it isn’t true that all readers are writers, it is true that all writers are readers. In the last two months, our colleague Sarah Ainsworth has posted approximately thirty book reviews by our young reviewers. This is nearly three times the number of book reviews we used to publish in an entire year! Many thanks to Sarah, and an especial thanks to all of you who are now regularly sending us reviews. We love to be able to publish your thoughts to share with other readers! We also love to see the comments that people are leaving in the book review section. Anna Rowell, reviewer of the graphic novel Young Beowulf: the Bloodbound Oath has received a comment and a thank you from the author himself (thank you, Alexis Farjado!), while one of our teacher readers, Sue Granzella, is taking up our reviewers’ recommendation of Save me a Seat. Well done, reviewers Sarina Banker and Nandini Krishnan! As Emma is talking about classics, I would also like to refer you to the three reviews of classics that have just been posted to the website: The Iliad, reviewed by Che Amaral. A Midsummer Night’s Dream reviewed by Justin Park, and Oliver Twist reviewed by Vivaan Kartik. One of the signs that these are ‘classics’ is that I don’t need to tell you who wrote them. If you haven’t read them yet and want to know more, their reviews are a great place to start. Until next week William A call for reviews of the classics from Editor Emma As you know, the team at Stone Soup has been hard at work bringing our new digital-only book reviews section to life on the website. We hope you will visit it and be inspired to read more books! As we worked on this we realized that there are lots of reviews missing. Many of the classic books that lit up my childhood—and continue to inspire and change kids around the world—simply do not have a Stone Soup review. Harry Potter, The Hunger Games, The Wind in the Willows, Charlotte’s Web, and The Golden Compass—among many, many more—are missing from our archives. We can’t believe it! Do you have a classic that you love? Or one you’ve been meaning to read? Or maybe you just need to fill out your summer reading list! Whatever the case, consider taking a look at our list of classic books in need of reviewing. We would love to hear your thoughtful, intelligent, enthusiastic, or even negative takes on any and all of these books. We would also love to hear from you if you think there are classic books missing from this list and missing from our website, even if you don’t want to review them yourself. We are sure that someone will! A friend of mine who edits book reviews and writes them for a living told me that the best book reviews read like a smart conversation between the writer and their closest friend. I hope you will keep that in mind as you begin working on your reviews. When you’re ready, click the Submit button in this Newsletter or at our website to send them to us. Happy reading and writing! Emma “Hey, you guys, we oughta show Brown what we’re made of!” From Stone Soup March/April 2002 Guts and a Few Strokes Written by Eve Asher, 10 Illustrated by Alicia Betancourt, 13 Stroke. Stroke. Breathe left. Straight legs, follow through with the arms. These are usually my thoughts while swimming the hundred-meter freestyle. For those of you who don’t know, that’s two laps. I can do it in about a minute and twenty seconds, sometimes more, sometimes less. Oh, and my name is Sophia, been swimming for five years in that very pool, been on the team for three years. Had I been going more slowly and looking ahead, I would have noticed that the seemingly endless deep blue of the chlorinated water was lightening into white. I would have noticed that I could no longer see the stems of sunlight poking through the water like sprouts poking through the air. This time, all I noticed was the green line on the bottom of the pool which would mean I would do a flip turn and start on another length if I wasn’t on my last one. I knew what to expect. I felt the warm sunlit wall under my hand. Done! You know, when I’m underwater, I can’t hear or see the rest of the world. I’ve escaped to what I call Blueland. In Blueland, I don’t have a meet in two days, I’m not stressing over fraction homework, I’m not watching whatever I eat because I’m allergic to peanuts, I’m just floating in blue and relaxing. Everything fades away into the blue. But, unfortunately, I’m not in Blueland now and I wasn’t then. Coach Morris called us together. “Did you notice how Sophia’s arms came out of the water straight? That’s following through. Keep that in mind. Remember, not only do swimmers with correct strokes go faster, they also don’t get disqualified. That’s practice for today, so dry off and go home.” Every practice ended with “dry off and go home.” It signaled us to disperse, which we did. Always. “That’s practice for today, so dry off and go home” Later, while gossiping in the locker room, Maggie, whom we trusted to know the most about the pool (no one knew why), gave us startling news. “The pool’s getting a new manager and they might fire Coach Morris,” she said, amazingly calm. Out came a scream from all of us of,
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The Iliad, Reviewed by Che Amaral, 12
I like books that are about football, basketball, and fantasy. My dad was tired of me reading the same genres over and over again, though. So he gave me The Iliad by Homer. The Iliad is thousands of years old. It is a famous Greek myth. The Iliad takes place in and around Troy, an ancient city. The version that I read, by Gillian Cross, has illustrations for me to not get confused with all the characters. There are so many characters! There are gods and goddesses like Zeus, Apollo, Aphrodite, Hera, Chrysies, and others. They act like humans. They take sides and they argue with each other. The Greeks are one side of the famous war. They are Achilles, Agamemnon, Ajax, and Patroclus, etc. The Trojans are on the other side of the famous war, like Dolon, Aeneas, Hector, etc. The chapter books that I read usually have one main character. Harrison, in one of my favorite books, Unstoppable, loves football and never gives up. Harry Potter, in Harry Potter, always wants to go on adventures. In The Iliad, I’m not sure who the main character is. There are Gods, Trojans, and Greeks. I do not really know which character to follow. It might be Achilles. He and Hector finally fight. Achilles kills Hector. Hector’s dad, King Priam, kindly asks Achilles for his son’s body so he can give him a proper funeral. Instead, Achilles ties Hector to his chariot and drags him on the sand all the way back to camp. JERK! I like stories with positive themes. For example, courage, not giving up, overcoming fear, being the best you can be, and trust. I don’t really like the Iliad because it is full of betrayal. Helen, a Greek wife, wanted to get captured to be with Paris, a handsome Trojan prince. So she cheats on her husband, Menelaus. That is how the famous and mythical Greek-Trojan war started. Just over a woman. A WOMAN! The Iliad is just full of killing, betrayal, bad attitude, and bad energy. It was not a calm story. It does not even have an ending. I don’t even know what side won because Homer did not tell me. But what I do like about the book are the names, like Xanthus, Blasius, Aeneas, and Ajax. These are cool names that I have never heard of before. I also admired Hector’s courage when he fought Achilles. He knew that he was going to die because Achilles was a legendary soldier. But he fought him anyway. So my opinion on this book is take or leave it even though it is thousands of years old and really famous and read by generations of readers. The Iliad by Homer. Candlewick, 2015. Buy the book here and support Stone Soup in the process! Have you read this book? Or do you plan on reading it? If so, comment below!
A Midsummer Night’s Dream, Reviewed by Justin Park, 13
The Discord of Love Love is a quarrel that never ends. It is a wonderful thing, to feel love. In many different ways, love is everywhere. In the play, A Midsummer Night’s Dream, by William Shakespeare, there are quarrels about love and the problems the lovers must endure. Each person is striving to find love whether it be workers, loyal citizens, royalty, or even fairies. There are many quotes about the problems that the characters encounter and each one portrays the speaker’s personality. One of the scenes changed the reader’s understanding especially after we watched the movie. Perspectives changed about how we feel and how we should feel about the things that were going on. During our time acting out the play, we experienced many scenes where we laughed and enjoyed our lines. The most important line in the play is stated by Lysander in Act 1 Scene 1. He states, “the course of true love never did run smooth.” What he means by this is that true love may come to a person but earning that love can be a difficult challenge and also a very tedious one. Lysander’s words certainly apply to him, for Hermia’s father disapproved of his marriage to his daughter. England in the Middle Ages was a patriarchal society. Fathers had a great deal of power over their daughters, and Egeus would not give his permission. He gave her three impossible choices; she could live as a nun and never marry, she could marry Demetrius, or, if she refused those choices, she would be put to death. Lysander also had Demetrius, a former lover of Hermia’s, to deal with. Another well-known quotation that relates to love is spoken by Helena in Act 1 Scene 1. ‘Love looks not with the eye, but with the mind and therefore the winged cupid painted blind.” She implies that a person in love perceives things that are not based in reality. When Titania sees Bottom as an ass and falls in love, she is blinded by the fact that he is an animal, not a human being. Another famous quote that is said in A Midsummer Night’s Dream, is by Demetrius, when he states “Are you sure that we are awake? It seems to me as yet we sleep, we dream. Do not you think that the duke was here, and bid us follow him?” This line implies that he and other characters feel as though they are dreaming. Is the Duke Theseus really asking them to follow them? Will he decide whether Hermia gets to marry Lysander and if Demetrius can marry Helena? It shows the lovers in a spot where the duke is going to decide whether Hermia gets to marry Lysander, and if Demetrius can marry Helena instead of Hermia. In the end, the lovers get their wish and marry the ones they wish to marry. Because they got their wish, and also met the duke who granted their wishes, they were blinded by joy and satisfaction. During our first time reading the play, I personally was confused. What on earth was going on? Act 1 Scene 1 was like a text written by aliens. The reader had to decipher it in the way one deciphers a code. I was told that we would that we would gain a better understanding of what was happening after watching the movie. When I heard this, I was a little skeptical. However, once I started watching the movie, I could see a whole different perspective as the characters spoke and acted out their lines. You can see the character’s feelings toward the things that are going on in the scene. The movie made me realize what was going on because in the text, the words seemed to be a different language. Even with the translations on the left side, I still couldn’t comprehend the sequence of what was happening. The character’s expressions and the tones of voices helped give me more clarity. After we finished reading the book and after watching the movie, we played out the acts and the scene for our classroom. In my opinion, I think that we did really well on the parts where we were supposed to express our emotions and our feelings about the things that we were to feel in the play. The people who were playing Act 2 Scene 1 I think were the most expressive and the best part of the parts that we played out. The scene was when Oberon and Titania were meeting in the woods and were talking about the baby and how each one of them wanted to use or raise him. I think that this was the best part because it showed the real fun that we were performing and how we feel about the scene. This might be because we were introduced to Puck, Oberon, and Titania. They were quarreling about what they want to do with the mortal boy, and Titania wouldn’t let Oberon even near the boy because he wanted to steal the boy and then turn him into a henchman. During our acting out of the play, we used the lights, the table, and other things that would help us act out the scenes. The characters, Oberon and Titania, were trying to work things out with the boy. However, this did not work out. Our acting out was a funnier version than the real one, and it showed how it was ridiculous and awkward. In conclusion, love is a complicated thing to achieve, but words, perspectives, and acting can help bring things together. The three quotes have a deep meaning about how the people in the play will express their emotions towards one another and how the characters will try their hardest to achieve their goal of love. A Midsummer Night’s Dream is a story about how the characters evolve and become the lovers they had hoped to be in the future. In the end, the characters do meet up