Memories take Enni Harlan back in her first poetry collection, Remember the Flowers, and we are on the journey with her. Over the course of forty-two concise and vividly descriptive poems, the reader is taken through seasons in the United States and South Korea. Each detail embodies a different personality applied to it, like “the face of some unknown celebrity” in a magazine, which Harlan, age five, unceremoniously vomits on as her plane lands in South Korea. No detail is insignificant to the narrator, who turns a simple event into her next important adventure. The series of autobiographical poems tell a story that features no damsels in distress, dragons, or talking fish that happen to live in a lake at the top of a mountain. Harlan has shown that a book does not have to resemble a blockbuster movie to keep a reader interested. The only ghosts in Enni Harlan’s poetry are her everyday haunts: the remembrance of family stories that have been passed down through generations, worries about herself and her family, and her lacking Korean vocabulary (“I don’t get half / The teacher says. / They talk in Korean, I’m only half / And most / Of my vocabulary’s food: / Bulgogi, kimchi, subak.”) Harlan’s poetry is rhythmic and flows naturally. For example, in her poem “In the Evening:” “The sky darkens All around. Still we walk Past the lamp posts, Past the tree I fell from once last summer.” In a conversational tone, Harlan lays out one of her main themes—imagination—and she makes sure that people know who she is. The sentence “I was Mary Lennox’s long-lost twin, / walking into the secret garden” starts Harlan’s poem “My Secret Garden.” In this simple sentence, Harlan shows that imagination is important to her—and so is who she is in her daydreams, because that is one of the places where she feels like herself. Another example of her use of imagination is in the poem “Beneath the Fruit Tree:” “Our teeth crashed down on seeds, not flesh. / The trickle of juice was painfully bitter. / Only we and the parrots ate from that tree, / feasting/ on imagination.” While many of the poems are playful, some poems are more serious. Remember the Flowers questions the “American dream.” This question is not asked and answered bluntly, but it is hinted upon through many poems and descriptions. For example, in her poem “Balcony:” “We journeyed to Anyang, where Umma grew up— Where they’d moved from house to house. The first house, a mere Shadow in her memory, Shared with her cousin’s family. There she played with her cousins till they Went to live ‘The American Dream.’” Here, the “American Dream” is not something happy and inspiring; it inflicts a feeling of separation and gloom. Harlan translates the sadness of family breaking apart. The stanza portrays the feeling of loss. In this case, one is left with a feeling that leaving family for the United States for a hazy vision of the promising future is almost a betrayal. In her poems, Harlan also expresses her empathy for humans and other animals. In “Fumigated,” Harlan’s Appa (father) rushes to get Umma’s (mother) mirror table from their house, which was going to be fumigated because of termites. Coming home, Appa says: “I saw the termites and they said, ‘Hi.’ ‘Get out of here,’ I said. ‘You’re about to die!’” Then, in the following sentences, Enni Harlan continues: “I laugh at him. A ridiculous story but I almost want to believe it.” Harlan finds the story funny, but she also wants the story to be true. This leads the reader to assume that the narrator somehow either feels connected to these termites—she feels sad about them dying because they have become a part of her house—or that she is unhappy about killing other creatures, no matter how small. Here, as in Harlan’s other poems, the events that may seem minuscule and insignificant gain a greater meaning. This is exactly what good poetry is meant to do—zoom in on small details and change the way people look at things. Remember the Flowers is a captivating read, every poem full of hidden pockets leading to a bigger (or smaller) subject. Near the end of the collection, as Harlan begins to speak about the Covid-19 pandemic, the poems are the most relatable (“We walked a while, / six feet apart. / Each time I smiled / I forgot / she couldn’t see it.”), but the rest of the poems are also easy to understand and relate to. All in all, Enni Harlan offers us a touching and thoughtful collection of poems about belonging, family, cultural differences (and similarities), and the world around us. Remember the Flowers by Enni Harlan, winner of the Stone Soup Book Contest 2021. Children’s Art Foundation, Incorporated, 2022. Buy the book via our Amazon storefront.
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Saturday Newsletter: September 3, 2022
Playing with Bubbles (Canon PowerShot S5 IS) by Enzo Moscola, 11; published in Stone Soup March 2022 A note from William Rubel Friends — Welcome back from our summer newsletter break! It was a much needed break for me and the Stone Soup team. I spent a good portion of the summer in Kenya where I completed a big chunk of a research project that I started thirty years ago. For the last fifteen of those years I have been working mostly on a dictionary of Samburu culinary vocabulary. I love writing dictionaries—for me a dictionary is like a collection of short short stories, so this was a really fun project for me—and I look forward to now moving the manuscript into publication. I celebrated my birthday while in Kenya. I had a Samburu village birthday party: 500 people! Singing! Dancing! Feasting! It was the birthday of my life. And now I’m 70! How did it happen? Fifty years ago, I was a college student. I started planning the first issue of Stone Soup around the time of my birthday in July, 1972. By September 1972, when we returned to the dorms, friends and I were well on our way to making my idea for a magazine of writing and art by children a reality. As Stone Soup enters its fiftieth year, I will be getting in touch with some of you to discuss ways in which we can keep this magazine going for another set of decades. It is going to take a combination of imagination, money, and people. I would like to take a moment to congratulate each of the 81 writers who sent in a novel or collection of short stories or poetry to this year’s Annual Book Contest. The deadline was August 21st. Speaking as a writer, I can assure all of you that completing a book-length story or collection is a huge achievement. The quality of submissions continues to improve. Thank you all for making this project such a success. We will announce the 2022 contest winners as well as the deadlines for the 2023 Book Contest in a couple months. Remember the Flowers, the winning title in last year’s Poetry category, by Enni Harlan, is now available for sale at all major book retailers and our Amazon store. Foxtale, the 2021 Fiction category winner by Sarah Hunt, is slated for release November 15th, so keep an on your inboxes in the coming weeks for the preorder announcement! Until next week, William’s Weekly Project Playing with Bubbles (above) is an extraordinary photograph. So many fabulous gestures caught mid-movement. I especially love the man in brown trousers and black backpack who is walking through the scene. We are so used to photographs of people in which everyone formally looks at the camera—and smiles! Enzo Moscola’s photograph accomplishes the almost impossible: it captures a group of people doing things—not necessarily together—but in the same space and with no apparent regard for the camera. Snapshots like this one take advantage of chance. The chance arrangement of people. The chance arrangement of colors. The chance arrangement of space. So here is the weekend challenge: I want you to venture into your neighborhood or city, a shopping center, a park, someplace where many people are out and about. Your first task is to find a situation that makes for an engaging photograph. It is hard to know what that might be in advance, so keep an open mind. It could be facial expressions, gestures, the way colors are distributed… I do want you to be sure to be aware of the faces. Recalling that in most photographs of people the subjects look at the camera, I’d focus on taking a photograph where nobody (or hardly anyone) is looking at the camera. This is a a project that you can do whether you are a student or an adult. So, everyone, pick up your cameras and phones and see what you can come up with! And as always, if you create something you find exciting, please submit it to Stone Soup for possible publication. Stone Soup is published by Children’s Art Foundation-Stone Soup Inc., a 501(c)(3) educational nonprofit organization registered in the United States of America, EIN: 23-7317498.


