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How Stories Work: Writing Workshop #29: Writing Dialogue

An update from the twenty-ninth Writing Workshop with Conner Bassett A summary of the workshop held on Saturday February 26, plus some of the output published below To begin today’s workshop, Conner showed us the opening sequence from the 2001 film adaptation of Waiting for Godot, asking that we notice what made the dialogue good—specifically to notice how the dialogue works, how the two characters respond to each other, how the dialogue is simultaneously funny and mysterious, notice its indirectness and opacity, and how it opens itself up to various kinds of communication. One of the most important observations from this scene was that the characters didn’t spend time explaining the situation to each other. After we discussed each other’s desires for writing dialogue like Emma’s tendency to omit implied filler words such as “hello, or goodbye,” and Amelia’s desire to portray the character’s as human and non-robotic through realistic conversation, we moved on to Conner’s “seven tools for writing dialogue,” not rules, starting with the suggestion that dialogue should be realistic, but not too realistic. The rest of the tools were as follows: 2) use dialogue to differentiate characters; 3) avoid small talk; 4) avoid the “information dump”; 5) gestures are more communicative than words; 6) have your characters talk to each other while simultaneously doing something else (as in the 2013 Pulitzer Price winning play Disgraced); 7) use indirect dialogue. The Participants: Emma, Sophia, Nova, Amelia, Ananya, Alice, Josh, Zar, Samantha, Ellie, Chelsea, Quinn, Penelope The Challenge: Write about 2-4 characters who are having a conversation while struggling to build a bird house. The instructions for building the bird house are provided below: Rinse out the milk carton with dish soap and warm water. Cut out a 1/2 to 3 in (3.8 to 7.6 cm) hole on 1 side of the carton. Poke small drainage holes into the bottom of the carton. Punch a hole at the top so you can hang the birdhouse. Glue 3 in (7.6 cm) sticks to the top of the carton to make a roof. Paint the carton’s exterior with water-based paint. Tie string or yarn through the hole at the top of the carton. Place small rocks or sand at the bottom of the carton to anchor it against the wind. Hang the birdhouse at least 5 ft (1.5m) off of the ground. To watch the rest of the videos from this workshop, like Lina’s below, click here.  Lina, 11

Girls with Flowers, art by Jane, 13

Jane Wheeler, 13 (Boxford, MA) Girl with Daisies Jane Wheeler, 13 We have all used different styles of face masks throughout covid to keep ourselves and others safe. This art represents the way we can find beauty even when covering up part of ourselves. Girl with Roses This girl is covering her face as covid has urged us all to do. The roses represent the beauty we can find even when things aren’t going quite how we want.

Why California Schools Should Introduce a World Language Program, by Olivia Shekou, 13

“With all the emphasis on 21st-century skills, with the globalization of the economy and the world becoming smaller because of technology, we have so many opportunities out there, and I think we’re behind — really, we’re behind most nations — in teaching second languages.” This statement by Desa Dawson, president of the American Council on the Teaching of Foreign Languages, proves how crucial it is for schools to introduce comprehensive world language programs. In the United States, less than 25% of students study a world language in school, contrary to 92% of Europe’s students who begin their world language learning as early as the age of six. Learning a different language gives students insight into different cultures around the world as well as a toolkit for communicating with people of different nationalities. Our students are the future of our country and it is crucial that they have these skills in life. California schools should provide comprehensive world language programs because it would expand students’ cultural worldview, help bridge the gap between diverse races, and ensure that students don’t fall behind in world language education. Introducing a comprehensive world language program is essential if we are to expand students’ cultural understanding of our world. The language of a nationality or country is closely intertwined with its culture and traditions. It cannot be taken out of this context. For example, every language has its own set of idioms. If we were to translate them verbatim into the English language, disregarding any cultural context, the idioms wouldn’t make sense. In the same way, if students learn the Chinese language without learning about Chinese culture, their understanding would be limited to what they’ve learned on paper. They would lose any understanding of the intangibles such as the culture, traditions and unspoken social customs. Guest teacher programs are an effective way of bringing a cultural context to language learning. The Chinese guest teacher program began in 2007 and it is now implemented within 30 states—Utah, North Carolina and Ohio being the largest of them. Schools in Bradenton, Florida are already preparing their second language students for a more complete cultural worldview. Xu Dou, a Chinese guest teacher in a Bradenton middle school, centers his lessons on Chinese traditions, including the writing of Chinese characters. Says Xu Dou, “If you want to learn real Chinese, you have to learn how to write Chinese characters… an indispensable part of Chinese tradition.” Similarly, the College Board, a non-profit organization that runs SAT and AP exams for the US, understood the benefits of providing a holistic view on language when it created an AP program in Chinese language and culture, which is similar to the second year program taught in colleges throughout China. If the College Board recognizes the importance of introducing a “cultural world language” program, it is time that the state of California catches on. Spanish teacher Caitlin Santin of Ross School, California, describes learning a second language as an experience that “opened up [her] world to different cultures and how different people live.” Second language programs would not be complete without an understanding of the culture and society from which languages come. California schools would benefit its students by providing language learning within a cultural context. Learning a world language also helps bridge the gap between people of different nationalities and can promote and repair relationships. Learning a language is not only necessary to communicate with its native speakers, but is also a way of breaking down barriers and differences between people as it brings commonality and connection to any interaction. This concept has been accepted worldwide. Language exchange programs such as France’s Parler en Paix initiative are centered on repairing relations between the French Jewish and Muslim communities affected by French laïcité (secularism). The organization’s students learn both Arabic and Hebrew in an effort to achieve the public’s end goal of a unified country. Ultimately, “efforts like Parler en Paix emphasize a desire within the French public for tolerance and unification,” (newsela) thereby making a profound impact on eliminating xenophobia and anti-semitism throughout France. By embracing the language, religion and culture of other races, we have the potential to unite diverse groups, even those with a history of religious and political conflict. And, with global warming trends, pandemics, and dwindling natural resources, our world is in a precarious position. It is up to our generation of students to unite as one global community to solve our world’s problems. Much like France, the state of California has a diverse racial and religious group of citizens. Second language teaching should be more integrated into our state’s education requirements in order to prepare for the future. California lags in world language education, which in turn limits the opportunities available to its students and affects their competitive standing. European countries have been the forerunner in recognizing the importance of introducing comprehensive world language programs. Even US government officials recognize that world language learning is “essential for US economic and strategic interests” (Washington, newsela). Without world language education, how can we expect our students to take on global interests? Moreover, learning a world language reaps many intellectual benefits that are necessary for success. “By acquiring a foreign language, you will double the number of available jobs… and climb the career ladder much faster” (Jiidee, University of the Potomac). If California’s students are to intellectually “stay in the running” against other countries, language learning is a must. And, due to the fact that language requirements are determined at the district or state level, each state must be accountable for its own students’ education. Some may argue that learning a second language isn’t necessary for California students, most of whom stay within California or take jobs where a second language isn’t useful or required. The chances are that the majority of California’s students will pursue jobs that don’t require international travel or global relations. Arguably, if second language proficiency is required on the job, diplomats or global professionals may be hired