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An update from our sixty-first Writing Workshop

A summary of the workshop held on Saturday, March 12th, plus some of the output published below

In this workshop, William went over the concept of Stream of Consciousness. He emphasized the lack of traditional structure in Stream of Consciousness writing, and the wondering and wandering nature of the style. The writers saw examples from literature, including Virginia Woolf and T.S. Eliot. As a mini-writing challenge, William played a clip from a silent French film and asked the writers to imagine a stream-of-consciousness from the perspective of the woman in the film.

The Challenge: Let the thoughts of your character run freely. Focus on sights, thoughts, feelings, sounds.

The Participants: Agatha, Eliana, Lauren, Yueling, Liam, Stella, Kate, Elbert, Peri, Anya, Rachael, Ananya, Kelby, Iago


 

Peri Gordon
Peri Gordon, 12
Sherman Oaks, CA

Bad Dog
by Peri Gordon, 12

Her
Hand reaches
Stroke, stroke
I love—
No, don’t leave
Wait—
Slam
Alone
School.
Tail
Chase, chase, pant
Where’s the food?
Yesterday’s was good
Combined with stroke stroke and music from black and white thing
Hoop
jump!
Treat
Hoop
jump!
Treat
Hoop
jump!
Treat
Hoop? Not again
Run away
Couch
Click, flash, see myself tiny
Soft hand soft hand stroke stroke
Just like
her
Still at school?
Ahhhh
Treats without jumping
Happyslurplick
Couch suddenly gone
Suddenly hard brown tiny balls
Food!
Yuckyewwblech!
Like when I licked the old woman’s skin
She was so nicesweetgentle but I should have
never
licked her skin
But she was so nicesweetgentle
Just like
her
Still at school?
Bite
Yuckkyewwblech!
Brown balls go flying
Deep voice

“Bad dog!”

Shrill voice

“Waffles! Bad dog!”
Waffles
I think that’s me
Or is it sweet round thing with little boxes?
I think it’s both
But “bad dog” usually means me
Usually followed by angry shouts
“Bad dog” comes after things like ripping up bed
Or running away
Or I guess making food go flying
Is it even food?
She
would never give it to me
Deep voice and shrill voice people aren’t as nice
She
is nicer
Still
at school?
Ugh
Couch
Wait
Wait
Wait
Close eyes
Peek
Close eyes
Peek
Blurry silhouette outside
Door opens
Run run run trip run run run ouch run run shatter noise she’s home!!!
Kisskisshappyslurplicknicesweetgentle
I love her
Soothing voice almost blocks out deep voice and shrill voice saying “Bad dog!”
“Bad dog” is okay when I can hear “good dog" too

 


 

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