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Flash Contest #60, October 2023: Make up an imaginary celebrity and write a story in which they are the main character–our winners and their work

Our October 2023 Flash Contest was based on Prompt #273 (provided by Stone Soup contributor Molly Torinus), which asked that participants get into the mind of an imaginary celebrity. We received 60 submissions this month, and they were certainly creative. There were musicians, fashionistas, astronomers, and basketball stars. Even a pirate was dropped into the mix! These celebrities definitely did not disappoint with their antics and reflections on the difficulties (and benefits) of being famous. As always, thank you to all who participated, and please keep submitting next month! In particular, we congratulate our Honorable Mentions, listed below, and our Winners, whose work you can appreciate below. Winners “Caught in the Spotlight” by Nikita Fishman, 12 “Behind Closed Doors” by Mia Goldschmidt, 10 “A Gloomy Winter’s Night” by Kellyn Hu, 13 “The Star of the Show(?)” by Mary G. Lane, 12 “Fake” by Kelly Shi, 13 Honorable Mentions “Desiderium” by Erin Bai, 11 “The Dopamine Rush” by Sophie Li, 11 “Stupid Fame” by Serena Liu, 10 “Jewel” by Emma Luo, 10 “Virulencer” by Luke Tang, 13 Caught in the Spotlight NIKITA FISHMAN, 12 ~Belle’s Perspective~ My heart raced like a stallion on the brink of a thunderous gallop. I stood backstage, just minutes away from performing, the air electric with anticipation. Mentally, I rehearsed my choreography one last time, each step etched in my mind like a vivid painting. I wiped my hands, now glistening with a sheen of sweat and took a deep, steadying breath. “이제 갈 수 있어요!” Jin, my manager, called out. We’re good to go. There was no time for contemplation, no room for the nagging shadows of doubt. I was swiftly ushered onto a rising platform, its mechanical hum resonating beneath my feet. The deafening roar from the audience grew more pronounced, engulfing me in a tumultuous crescendo akin to a relentless tide crashing against the shore. Now, they could catch a glimpse of my forehead. The cheers triple in intensity. As I officially graced the stage, a luminous sea of lights embraced me, momentarily blinding me. However, I quickly adjusted to the new environment, scanning the crowd, a constellation of stars that stretched before me. “What’s up, Los Angeles?” I roared, my distinct accent adding a touch of authenticity I knew my fans loved. I face-planted onto the hotel bed, utterly drained. I began shedding my backstage sweatshirt with an exhausted groan, feeling the weight lift from my shoulders as it came off. Taking a deep breath, I started the arduous task of rising to my feet, savoring each counted second as I made my way up. I was young, an age of twenty-seven. But after six hours of dancing, twisting my body, and enduring rough days at the gym, there were times when my body felt like it was years away, and sometimes I was a 72-year-old. Just yesterday, on the eve of commencing my world tour, the nurse lifted my shirt upwards, brandishing a needle as lengthy and sharp as a rapier. After finding the center of my back pain, the nurse pinpointed a location between my spinal discs. In the blink of an eye, the petite but menacing dagger pierced my flesh, plunging its venomous fangs into my body. A distinct feeling of pressure followed this as it penetrated deeper, as if a minuscule tunnel had opened beneath my flesh. It was my first cortisone shot ever and recommended by my manager. I wonder what my fans would think if they knew my secret. I managed to sit up straight, reaching for my phone. With a quick tap, I opened Instagram and navigated to the photos I had posted earlier from my performance, diving into the comment section. I was welcomed with an ocean of encouragement and a deluge of heart emojis. An infectious smile plastered my face. Unfortunately, it didn’t take long before the venomous hate comments surfaced, slithering toward me like malevolent demons emerging from the shadows. “She’s flat,” one voice hissed, while another accused, “Wearing such revealing outfits, aren’t you ashamed?” The cruelty peaked with a spiteful command, “Why don’t you wear something respectable for once!” I sighed. I received an abundance of comments like these, and with each nasty remark, their impact seemed to cut even deeper into my tired soul. Wearing more provocative clothes, or what some might call revealing, is simply an attempt to tap into the Western market. Is that so wrong? Furthermore, I fail to understand how wearing revealing clothing automatically equates to negative judgment. Suddenly, I find myself isolated in the middle of cultural conflicts. My Korean fans prefer me to maintain a more cartoonish appearance, while my manager encourages me to leverage my rapping talent by adopting a certain dress style. Suddenly, a loud knock resonated through the room, jolting me from my deep thoughts. “Who is it?” I questioned. “나야, 네 엄마야!” a familiar voice responded. It’s me, your mom! “Oh, come in, Mom!” My mother entered the room, cradling a mysterious black box in her hands. I noticed a subtle tremor in her fingers as she settled on the edge of the bed, reaching out to gently envelop my hands within her own, the moment heavy with anticipation. “What’s wrong?” I asked, unsure of my mom’s pale expression. Without uttering a word, she extended the black box toward me, her silence adding to the intrigue. What could this be about? With anticipation coursing through me, I carefully shifted the box lid, unveiling its contents. At the center, a gleaming silver knife and a mysterious note lay in a sea of white confetti. I carefully picked up the message, reading it. I know where you live. I also know where your family lives. I know your address; don’t think I don’t know.   ~Jong-Su’s Perspective~ I sighed while running my fingers through my hair. I took a deep breath, inhaling the crisp, cold air. The night’s cool touch brushed against my skin, serving as a whisper of reassurance amidst

Raya and the Last Dragon, Reviewed by Winnie Li, 12

Have you ever thought about being a lone rider in a dystopian world trying to save the one you love the most? A world broken because of fear. Raya and the Last Dragon is a movie released in 2021 produced by Walt Disney Animation Studios that captures your attention with beautiful, vivid images. It is a very realistic movie that is in many ways the same as our world. The theme in this movie is to have trust in people and that when we work together we are stronger. This movie, directed by Don Hall and Carlos López, has many flaws, but the theme is what really makes it worth watching. It starts off by showing us Raya, the main character, riding through a desert alone in an empty world. We then get to see a flashback of her childhood which shows us how her father, Chief Benja of Heart, deemed her worthy to be a guardian of the dragon gem. Raya then explains how the five lands, Heart, Talon, Tail, Spine, and Fang were all connected once as Kumandra. The people of Kumandra lived happily with the dragons only to have a horrible monster called the Druun come and turn everything they touched into stone, including the dragons. Then Sisudatu, the last dragon, combined her powers with her siblings to create the dragon gem and blasted the Druun away. Everyone who was turned to stone came back–except the dragons, and all that was left of Sisu was her gem which humans fought to possess. 500 years later, a war broke out between the five lands, and the dragon gem was broken into five pieces. Each land took one. That also brought back the Druun who turned Raya’s father into stone. In the flashback, we see that the war between the five lands started because Chief Benja trusted that the five lands would want to come together and become Kumandra again. Raya decides to trust her father and makes friends with Nammari, the princess of Fang, who tells her that Sisu might still be alive at one of the ends of the many rivers. Out of trust, Raya brings Nammari to the place where the dragon gem was placed only to find Nammari using her to get the dragon gem. In the process of taking it, they break the gem. From that point forward, Raya begins looking for Sisu and the rivers’ ends so that she can find some way to revive her father. This movie has a great theme, but there is still more to it! This movie connects a lot to the real world. We often don’t trust each other because of fears, traumatic events, or betrayals in our past. Perhaps the Druun doesn’t just exist in Raya’s world but also ours. The Druun is like a part of us that doesn’t trust anybody and is full of hate and fear instead of trust and love. The point of this movie is to show us that we need to overcome our inner Druun to be really successful and content in our lives. It also does a good job of showing two characters who are surprisingly similar, but not exactly the same. Chief Benja, Raya’s father, was a very hopeful and brave person who thought he could bring together the world by taking the first step. He was unfortunately turned to stone before he could tell Raya, but then Sisu came along and finished the job for him. Sisu was the one that finally got Raya to trust their greatest enemy and to take the first step in saving the world. Chief Benja and Sisu both have a selfless and hopeful personality, despite the fact that one is a dragon and the other is a human. It is very entertaining to see how a human and a dragon can be so similar and how a movie can connect so much to our world, which is why you should watch this movie and experience these things yourself. While this movie has many good things, there are also some bad sides to it. One of the bad things is that the movie moved at a very fast pace. Every event, whether it is happy or sad, doesn’t give you any time to feel with the character. After each heartbreaking event, there is no time to stop and soak up all the sadness, and it is hard to feel what the main character is feeling. Even in happy or funny scenes, we don’t have time to feel the moment of joy or the feeling of accomplishment a character is feeling. Sisu, the last dragon in this movie, also seems to act too quickly, which makes the movie seem kind of silly and unwise. For example, on their ride to Spine, Raya just told Sisu how there is no point in trusting anyone because the world is broken. When their ship gets to Spine, Sisu races in front of Raya so she can show her that people can be trusted and ends up being trapped. This move is silly and unwise because Sisu has been asleep for 500 years and knows nothing about what happened and how mean people can act. Despite the fast pace of this movie, it still shows the theme very clearly, which is why you should watch this movie. Even though we did not have time to feel the world inside the movie with the main characters, we still see very clearly how Raya transformed after she was revived by taking the first step to show her friends the importance of trust. In the end, she saw what her father (as well as Sisu) wanted her to do and helped them make their dreams come true. She saved the people of her world, and she saved the people she loved most. Raya and the Last Dragon is a story of our world that has been changed into a more fantastical version.